Score: 8

"neat"

submission: Nintendo Story ep 3

date: November 16, 2008

Visuals: you should spend more time on the drawing stages as the characters were not all that well drawn at times, sometimes they were good but others they weren't. The animation was well done, a few times it seemed to pause for a little bit but I'm not sure if that was intentional or not

Audio: A good choice in audio for this one, just one little issue though, it seemed to get quieter as I went through it and had to turn up the volume here and there, be careful about that

Overall: An awesome video with lots of action and was very entertaining to watch, Good Job

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Score: 8

"Decent Job"

submission: You Can Only Dream

date: November 16, 2008

Visuals: stunning, very well done and animated, just a few things that other people have already pointed out so I won't trouble you with them. I will say that the scene transitions were too slow though, and it isn't my computer they were slow at all three graphic levels

Audio: excellent choice in music for this one, really went with the piece, as did the sound effects

Overall: a very nice piece of work that reminds me of "The Composer", and really if you ironed out the problems that have been noted it would be every bit as good

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Score: 6

"Simple"

submission: Punkin Shoot

date: November 16, 2008

Visuals: very basic, not very well drawn, but the animation was smooth thankfully. The objects moved by too fast for there to be much skill involved and they should be slowed down and the rounds could stand to be made longer. Also there's something amiss with the scoring I heard about 10 pumpkins being hit, no kitties, and I only got 80 points

Audio: what you have is good, but there is definitely more that can be added to this background music would be nice for starters

Overall: nice concept, could stand to be improved upon. I really liked playing it though, it's very addicting

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Score: 6

"A good start"

submission: Make your monster

date: November 15, 2008

Visually everything looks good, simple but it has a cartoony look to it that makes it almost comical to play, one problem is that the sunglasses don't move when you click on them, fix that, and if you feel so inclined some decent tunes from the audio portal would be nice to browse through. I wish you luck with your future endeavours, you have a good start here

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Score: 8

"neat"

submission: The Three Commandments

date: November 10, 2008

Visuals: Could be better drawn but I think they were on the better side of average, the animation looked pretty smooth, and I agree subtitles would help a lot in this flash

Audio: While normally i don't encourage the use of the robot voices, it works in this flash, hard to understand at times and it reminded me of Will Shatner at the end, but reminiscent of a passive observer to the decline that the flash is about

Overall: Great message that people really should listen to and I totally agree with you, just keep working on the visual presentation with your next work

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Score: 4

"again?"

submission: Instawin

date: November 9, 2008

Visuals: Badly drawn, too simple, I mean come on you've been making lots of submissions, do you not learn anything from them? Or are you just content to have tons of poorly done flashes than a few good ones? Your drawing skills need to be improved

Audio: I actually liked this part of the flash, much better than that speakonia crud, at least you care about one aspect of flashing

Overall: For you this is halfway decent, but you really should try and improve your drawing, and what was he whole thing with the "xylophone"? It wasn't a xylophone it was a paint brush, maybe I'm to dense to pick up on the humour in that

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Score: 7

"simple"

submission: How Shall He Die 1 - M136

date: November 9, 2008

Visuals: Not all that well done, it was poorly drawn and the animation was very rough, that whole deal with the gun changing from a half decent one to the poorly drawn one didn't help matters, and I really couldn't understand what was happening during the magic death

Audio: good choice here, and some decent sound effects, sounds like you got the screaming from Excite Bike, good job

Overall: Simple concept, could stand to see a few more options if you decide to make another like this, I'd say the minimum is at least double what you have here, hope to see you improve further and make some great stuff in the future

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Score: 8

"neat"

submission: FlashSaga2: Space

date: November 9, 2008

Visuals: Same issues as there were in your first flash saga, drawings not smooth, but i found the animation to be well done here, jerky but the jerks went with the song so I assume they're intentional. Also, I liked how you made everything feel outer space-ish with the colours

Audio: Good choice of song again, just added to the feel of space, it went very well with the visual content great job

Overall: Nice story, and other than the average drawing and animation, very little room left for anything more along the lines of improvements

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Score: 8

"cool"

submission: FlashSaga1: Daily 5th

date: November 9, 2008

Visuals: the drawing was about average, which seems to be your choice in styles, the animation was smooth, good job here. Only thing is that a few times when the words popped up I couldn't gauge fast enough what was going on before the scene moved on to something else

Audio: nice choice here, went well with the overall theme, and the sound effects were good as well

Overall: nice story, seemed a bit rushed though, I understand where you're working to a song that it happens easily, try and draw it in a way that gives us more time to appreciate what's going on

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Score: 10

"that was amazing"

submission: Tywo At Large Ep. #3

date: November 1, 2008

Everything about this video was top notch, the animation and drawings were stellar, the voice acting was flawless, and I was surprised that it didn't lag on my computer. The humour in this video was priceless, the way you designed the characters is conducive to hilarity, you are a very skilled artist, keep at it

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